Thursday, 5 February 2015

Coursework feedback


Research and Planning - 12
Research and planning is complete, and some areas are detailed and excellent. The research into similar products is well done, with a variety of film openings explored. However there is no meaningful work shown on target audiences, this needs much more work on it, looking into areas such as demographics and applying it to the film opening. There is some work on the organising of actors etc, but no thought on props is evident, although this was clearly thought about throughout the film. The script is excellent, as is the concept idea. However there is no storyboard to go with the work. Overall there are some holes on the blog, but what is there is of a high standard.
Main Task – 43
Excellent use of props, the camera work is also confident and controlled throughout. There are a good variety of different shot types and the sound is sophisticated throughout with a layered sound-scape being built up that works well with the images. Close attention has been paid to mise en scene and the work clearly reflects the research work carried out. The opening is a little dark throughout and would have benefited from some more thought to lighting, and it would also have benefited some more dialogue. However,  the voice over fits with convention and the opening is appropriate for the task set.   

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