I gave you feedback a while ago Ben, but don't really feel you have acted upon it. Could you please ensure that you tackle the changes I have suggested and then reply to this feedback letting me know what you have done. Thanks
At the moment i have Read the Feedback and edited the way my analysis have been presented. I have put each genre into their own post, I have put a video link for each film at the end of each analysis, i have also cleaned it up a bit. I am now going to work more on my analysis - adding a few more points
Good work Ben, just ensure you look at the detail, are all the images jpeg's? have you discussed each of the areas we discussed in the foundation portfolio booklet? etc.
At the moment i have Read the Feedback and edited the way my analysis have been presented. I have put each genre into their own post, I have put a video link for each film at the end of each analysis, i have also cleaned it up a bit. I am now going to work more on my analysis - adding a few more points
ReplyDeleteGood work Ben, just ensure you look at the detail, are all the images jpeg's? have you discussed each of the areas we discussed in the foundation portfolio booklet? etc.
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